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''Fading Away'' by ForTheLoveOfWalrus

:iconbatrnan:
This is my first critique so I apologize if it sucks.. xD

I really enjoy this piece, there is so much feeling in it. It really tells a story behind it. The expression on the character is what really got me. Kind of a "hard time depression" thing going on here.
The colours are just wow, being I love fall colours. It ties in with the whole picture.
For a second it was hard to tell what the words said: "Fading Away" but I guess that's just because they literally are fading away.
That fur, I love that fur! It's so adorable.

I'd have to say the one thing you might need to work on is the anatomy. I find the arms a little too skinny and also it looks like the neck is bit long. (Unless the character itself really does have a long-ish neck.)

But, overall, this is really well put-together. Superb job. =')
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ForTheLoveOfWalrus Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks love c': and the neck just looks long cause his scarfy neck and awkward body but yeah his arms and stuff/hand i biffed, dont usually draw anthroC: thank you so much for the critique hahaha :) yeah i tried making the letters fade out and look like smoke<3 thank you :) i work on making the expressions kind of the vocal point of my drawings:) haha and thats exactly his persona :) <3 ill work on that anatomy;) <3
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:iconbatrnan:
batrnan Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OKAY SOUNDS GOOD
CRITIQUES ARE SCARY
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ForTheLoveOfWalrus Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
IKNOWRIGHT<3
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